Encounter

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made this for my girlfriend ^^

Encounter

In the autumn of one dark night, shadowed by extorted moon light

In my chambers I lay, quite peaceful and at bay

Watching leafs fall off trees from my window

 

T’was then that I saw, the night, not peaceful at all

Bore in my mind through the glass and steel I hid behind

From the crimson eyes of a creature most feral

 

From my heart I knew, there was nothing to do

Here I was prey, from mind to heart came dismay

Those eyes, sanguine, not blinking as the wind blows

 

And though I knew, I wouldn’t be easy to slew

Black became my mood, from this creature so shrewd

To be hunted, I knew, there was no greater peril

 

From my bed I rose, to challenge that foe

In my mind, I thought, I need only one shot

In my night cloths I ventured to retrieve my gun

 

Returning with my tool, practicing as I had in school

I glanced to my window to see, there lay my enemy

Laughing to myself as I wandered to the door for my prize

 

Out into the cold I walked, like a wolf I stalked

Slowly and quietly I traveled, thinking of how baffled

My prize would look polished and treated in the morning sun

 

Weapon loaded and turning the corner, my life grew shorter

Did my prey scatter? No… from the roof there came a clatter

I looked up to see the giant wolf dive at me from the skies

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SEVEN commented on Encounter

11-15-2010

I'm not a big fan of dark poetry but I kinda like this one...I actually visualized this scene and creepy is the only word I could come up with......this piece is waaaaaay out there.......good write....Kudos

EvilPoems

11/15/2010

thnx!!!

cheronld commented on Encounter

09-23-2010

Ok....those visuals really made me shiver....I could almost feel the breath of the wolve coming at me....what a great write...I hope that this is but one chapter to this tale...I look forward to reading more...Cher

ShadowStealer commented on Encounter

08-22-2010

And then what happened?!?!?!? Tell me!!!! Wonderful!!! ShadowStealer

EvilPoems

08/22/2010

use your imagination ;)

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Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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