ENDING

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    ENDING

    all around us someone else’s love is ending
    while other’s sadly just go on pretending
    be careful of the message you’re sending
    nevermind your neighbor if your yard needs tending
    you’re leaning too far if backwards you’re bending
    keep to yourself the opinions your lending
    what comes around goes around when it comes to offending
    beware the company of which you’re befriending
    contemplate the words that are pending
    broken hearts are always worth mending
    think of death as a beginning not an ending

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    Elke commented on ENDING

    07-19-2009

    Wow! I love this one. It is so wise, so true. I've been away, and this has me fired up.

    trocka7 commented on ENDING

    06-29-2009

    I liked this a lot, great flow and a really great point! Thanks for sharing, I definitely enjoy your style!

    fathi1943 commented on ENDING

    06-29-2009

    A poem of love and wisdom combined. Keep up the good work. You have the talent and the style.

    soulwriter commented on ENDING

    05-13-2009

    The meter and flow work with the continual rhyme, all fused together to form a perfect ending... write on write on!

    kdarcy commented on ENDING

    05-11-2009

    Yes, alot of work here, well done

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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    organicchick’s Poems (28)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    THE WEDDING OF NEVER 12
    ENDING 7
    DISTORTED 9
    HUMAN 8
    CLAWING 9
    MOTH EATEN MEMORIES 5
    THE MORE YOU LOVE 4
    SUBTLE ARE THE SIGNS 5
    SHE'S LIKE SPRING 3
    MUD ON MY SHOES 5
    JUST CALL ME PAIN 9
    FAIRY TALE TOLD 3
    BITTERNESS 2
    LIFE 6
    SEED OF LIFE 6
    SECOND LOOK 4
    ICICLES 6
    LOVE DAD 3
    HANGING ON 4
    PROOF 2
    HOLD ME DEAR 2
    GOSSIP 1
    BROKEN WING 3
    A LITTLE LOVE. 4
    Your Fix. 2
    A New Season 3
    The mirror 6
    The lovely flower. 6