Endless night

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    Endless night

    In life you can see whats going on
    what would you do if you could look at your self from somewhere else
    would you be the same
    we change so much in life
    we don't even see it till
    you wake up one day and look in the mirror
    and find your self staring at a stranger
    then would you wounder
    what happened to the old times
    times to be yourself
    without being afraid of being judged
    would you be happy at the changes
    what if your not
    what would you do
    would you leave your old self to die
    or would you go try to find them
    if you couldn't stand to look in the mirror anymore
    would you just break the mirror
    what about the old times
    the old rhythm's
    the old songs we sang
    the old friend ship we shared
    the happy times
    when life was less complicated
    when life was care free
    less troubles
    less drama
    the only pain you felt was when you fell and got a scratch
    when you fell from  tree branch
    crashed your bike
    now things are different
    we have broken hearts
    broken wallets
    broken dreams
    the only dream we all share
    freedom
    what if that was taken from you
    the government has taken the freedom from the people
    it has taken the happyness from the happy
    its taken the dream from the dreams
    we must ban together and save our freedom
    save of lives from the endless night.

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    scrye commented on Endless night

    10-16-2009

    very deep and well thought-out. It flowed wonderfully and the flow along with the imagery was excellent. Keep posting I see great works coming your way. Loved it

    bforibus commented on Endless night

    10-16-2009

    again the self doubt and the dark thoughts are a great combination. the deepness of the poem is great as well. but it seems u are taking a common thought and picking up where the rest left off. make it unique. either way still a great job

    Chelles commented on Endless night

    10-15-2009

    Aaahhh I miss the old times but at the same time I would never change what I've gone through or who I became. Because of it all, I am a stronger woman than half the men I know. Emotionally of course lol. I love this though. It definitely makes you think. And I love that. Keep up the great writes!!

    Rygar commented on Endless night

    10-15-2009

    your freedom lies at the end of your pen, go then, tell of when we were young, too dumb to know too carefree to care, share in the love of others, the lovers, under the cover of madness you're safe, this place you tell of, the smell of fear, to hold dear the memories of old, the cold cant reach you when i'm here, no dear, this endless night ends tonight.... loved it Raven :)

    TimG commented on Endless night

    10-15-2009

    WOW ! And you're right...we all must pull together amd stand up or there may be nothing left !

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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