Enjoy the Surf

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    Enjoy the Surf

    Stare out into oblivion
    of the golden path dancing
    toward the sun at dusk.
    Like diamonds under yellow chandeliars;
    Floating atop the choppy seas
    that lie between us.
    Once imprisoned within
    the open iron gates in a
    cathedral of loveless years.
    Saints converted;
    Conscientous thoughts diverted
    by all those wasted tears.
    Numb almost and giggling
    stupid and stoned.
    Smiling back into the faces of
    ever-smiling misery masks...
    And treading in a current of bitter past
    that just threatens to sweep me away;
    Only your current is a little stronger
    than a mountain of that.
    A storm of confusion is somewhere out at sea, babe...
    So let's just enjoy the surf.

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    bigalbi commented on Enjoy the Surf

    06-25-2009

    i love your poem i think that you have a great style keep up the good work

    charliedue commented on Enjoy the Surf

    11-17-2008

    very entertaining!! hope you keep sharing!

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