enlightened

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    enlightened

    In my minds eye I sea,
    my body floating after me..



    by Kage no Kitsune

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    BringMeBullets commented on enlightened

    04-14-2010

    WOW-- This is wild. I love the images that flow through my head in these few single words that you have written. Your words are those of a god. Thank you for sharing!

    Chaos128 commented on enlightened

    09-28-2009

    Very metaphysical, Kage, and very sharp. I'd write more but i don't think the comment should be longer than the poem ha ha.

    knight4696 commented on enlightened

    09-27-2009

    Concise and yet ......beautifully stated. Good Job!

    trocka7 commented on enlightened

    07-27-2009

    Simple perfection................................beautiful!

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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