Enthusiasm: God Within

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Enthusiasm: God Within


Unfolding forth from deep within this me,
I feel the love and the yearning and the joy to be:
My life, that feels so full and free--
Happy here and now; and hopeful new life to see;
My self, made in God's image "I am"--on days that flower and flee.
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Michael: Godlike one.
Like water--living--reflecting the glorious light of the sun.
My brief lifetime--bright and bounteous before eternity.
Though small and frail and mortal--perhaps striving futilely--
Doomed to die too soon--even sooner than my genetic mortality--
And perhaps my everything will become nothing, for final futility--
Vanishing into timeless worldless void--all in vain--all vanity:
Still, my little now feels like the start of eternity;
Still, my little here feels like part of infinity.
I thank God for my here and now--for my life--no matter what will be.
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God made me.
I, made by God--I, by God's breath living--I, made like God to be.
Though small and frail and mortal, with unknown final fate facing me.
My mind embraces life and love passionately--
Looking for light in the densest dark--looking for hope in the fiercest fate.
I have read libraries of learning, and I write my essays of philosophy;
But, oh! The light! I long for the light!
While the black and white of day and night like mice gnaw away.
I hold tight to the light of life while it shines, and I write my heart in my poetry.
Poesis: The power to create.
Entheos: God within.
Love of life: To enjoy the good and endure the bad of fate.
Life loved intensely--
Thirst for life--and hunger forever to be.
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My "I am."
This reflection and reality of God within me--
Though I am small and frail and mortal, with unknown fate facing me--
I thank God for giving me life, and making me one,
In the image of "I am'--I shall thank God to the day my life is done--
That my life like a mortal moon reflects the brightness of the sun--
How ever briefly.
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My life--
Oceanic and deep--full of wonder and terror--grieved inconsolably--invincibly happy.
My mind knows the world--full of magic and miracle I sense and see.
My heart knows you, loves and cares about you--for you are like me:
Image of God within: Entheos--I am: My self, as shining as a sunlit sea.

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--by Michael L.P
also known as M.L.P.
aka PoetWithCancer, aka PWC, aka Mr. Poet
Copyright (C) 2011 by M.L.P. All rights reserved

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abuelita1 commented on Enthusiasm: God Within

11-29-2010

Michael. the love you have shared with so many and the hearts you touch shall keep you alive with grand memories, to be passes down from one to another. If you only make a difference to one person, that difference will continue to live and thrive, because of you. I've always admired your art, but I admire you, as a person more. Love......Super Angel

abuelita1 commented on Enthusiasm: God Within

11-29-2010

Michael, This is absolutely beautifully, amazing. Never stop believing in life or love, for they are within your reach. Know although you may feel alone, you are not. My heart to yours, thank you for making me cry...You are always in my heart, thoughts and prayers, Michael. The best is yet to come. Always praying, always wishing you the best, Always.....Love you....Super Angel

Kanicki commented on Enthusiasm: God Within

11-29-2010

Michael - what a beautiful write; your writing demostrates there is much mortal life left in you; the power in believing; miracles do happen; our life and birth into our mortal shell is a miracle...there are miracles beyond too. But stay among the mortals you still have much work to do. If you get a chance get someone to get you this book; "Recalled By Life" it might be called "Recalled to Life" The doctors gave my brother 1 hour to live and he lived 19 1/2 years...as I said to him; don't put so much faith in those who don't have the power to help you heal...believe there are answers and never never give up...you and God will decide when you mortal life is to go through a transition...know that you are never alone...you remain in my thoughts and prayers. Peace, Love, Comfort and Light.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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