EONS TIDE

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    EONS TIDE

    Spatial comprisal, o’er horizon line cascade

    Cosmos far flung on canvas uncontained

    A currency by graces design given free

    So orders mortal steps venture to eternity

     

    Coursing within this rift, a spirit tethers others

    Ancestral roots parade a struggle between brothers

    A line dividing, is scrawled along times' sand

    All dream to reach and hold for each

    Eon’s Tide will ne’er subside

    For neither will the heart of man

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    ianscott commented on EONS TIDE

    04-08-2010

    great poem.a currency by graces design given free great line
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    Marsink

    04/08/2010

    The one you noted is one of my more endearing lines as well (I'm quite biased, though). Thanks for the up and up compliment to encourage!

    koolmom0 commented on EONS TIDE

    01-22-2010

    Very nice hun, the imagery is awesome. I enjoy reading your work. :) Rita
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    Marsink

    01/22/2010

    You're most welcome, rita. It was hard to get it this far. I thank you

    jadedoll commented on EONS TIDE

    01-19-2010

    I like the flow of this poem. Keep keeping on great write :)
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    Marsink

    01/19/2010

    How very nice to see your words on this page, across the cyber road. Thanks for reading!

    Bettysrainbow48 commented on EONS TIDE

    01-18-2010

    I have not seen any poems I haven't liked so far.Good Job
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    Marsink

    01/18/2010

    I am truly glad of that! Thanks for reading this piece that refused to be any longer.

    knight4696 commented on EONS TIDE

    01-17-2010

    Marsink! Awesome job! I love the celestial piece. My favorite lines - A currency by graces design given free - So orders mortal steps venture to eternity. Awesome! Great write my friend! Ken
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    Marsink

    01/19/2010

    Thanks for your great visitation of words to spur me on to write something still; (I don't know what, but something). I am always appreciative of your way to take the writer to a place of consolation. You are needed here at OP :-

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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