Equilibrium

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A free thought that flowed through me one day when I was pondering....

Equilibrium

Ancient mysteries arise
Like sweet and fragrant smoke
Heart, Mouth and Head are aligned
When ancestors are invoked
Now is revealed as the only time
Holy moment ever-lasting
Appearances ebb and flow
And recede back into
The ocean of illusion
Illumination casts its glow
Snuffing out confusion
Veil is lifted, eyes wide open
Reflecting Truth
As does Mother Moon
Displaying her Fullness
Being her Allness
Cycling within the
Harmony of the Cosmos
A deep knowing
Is reignited within me
Its flame fuels my spirit
A way has been shown
To a place of balance
Harmonic alignment of Being
Simple steps are walked
On the path to equilibrium

Make the words that you
Say in your Mouth
The same as what
You believe in your Heart
Make your feelings of Heart
The same as the
Beliefs of your Mind
If the Mouth doesn't speak
What the Heart feels
Or the Head knows something
That the Heart chooses not to see
Then balance cannot find its way
And there is harmonic misalignment
Truth unto oneself
Can heal the pain of self-deception

I feel my roots anchoring me
Firmly to my Being
A new sense of assurance
A primordial remembrance
Of Me...

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diggz commented on Equilibrium

05-10-2011

I really like this, nice flow!!! Keep up great work! JohnnyDiggz

ShadowStealer commented on Equilibrium

08-03-2010

Nothing I can write can put into words how great this poem is, so I will only say my opinion of this poem is greatly reflected in the words of these magnificent poets displayed below me. Very wonderful poem!!! ShadowStealer

trocka7

08/03/2010

wow, I'm humbled by your comment, thank you so so much!

Helios commented on Equilibrium

08-03-2010

There are those thoughts that are part of the great mysteries of the world, and sometimes I consider us fortunate to be able to hear [ or realize] these thoughts that seem linked to the world. THe poems has the third parts that ties it together as a being in deep thought. Beautiful words. Helios

DeepEclipse commented on Equilibrium

04-22-2010

The first part seems to piece together the visual, the second part seems to bring about the epiphany. Then the last little stanza pulls together the conclusion. Interesting how the poem talks about harmony and is itself written in one. Loved the descriptiveness of it. The moon has many aspects to write about. Well crafted piece.

swiftbird2C commented on Equilibrium

09-19-2009

Primordial remembrance against the pain of self deception. A well worded reminder.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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