EQUILIBRIUM OF LOVE

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    A person troubled with more problems in the life comforts himself by pushing down the past memories behind the past and ensure himself the happiness on his own

    EQUILIBRIUM OF LOVE

                   Equilibrium of love

    Mind exiled in the sum of algebra
    Eyes missed in the desert of geometry
    Heart troubled in enduring the calculus
    Life zigzagged in the quest of matrix
    Never, the love could try its hope!

    The soul lingering between null and void
    Immersed in the theorem of gravity;
    It contend the unsolved ridiculous puzzle
    But defeated in the puzzle illogical
    And tested always with the acid of life;

    The love ascended to the axis of universe
    And rest on the horizon of life unreached
    In singing the hymn of heaven in the ecstasy of joy
    Followed by the chorus of nightingales
    Dreaming the breath in non-living but loving heart;

    Future propelled behind the past and resist
    And the past thrown into the astray to desist;
    The virtual time locked up in inertia and momentum
    And the life embedded safe in its own death and birth
    Now, the pain allays the soul from the demise and earth;

                                          By RK CHOWDARY

     

     

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    sanctus commented on EQUILIBRIUM OF LOVE

    02-22-2011

    Very nicely constructed and written......................
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    sevyn7 commented on EQUILIBRIUM OF LOVE

    02-20-2011

    What a beautiful poem, in remembrance of lost loved ones, is the sum of your intellectual poetic equation. Bravo, Sev'n
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    sevyn7

    02/20/2011

    We all have moments in life that riddle us to uncertainty, but sometimes its best to leave them, and move on. I had to read this again to get the full understanding. You got me thinking on this one for sure. Great from beginning to end. Sev'n

    RKCHOWDARY11

    02/20/2011

    Hi Dear sevyn7, How do you do? It is my honor that you have complimented my poem with kind love. I would like to tell you that you can read it again as you have really liked it. But the meaning is simple as we all are aware that we are facing troubles with our bodies,mind, heart soul and life -physically, mentally,psychologically, emotionally, financially and in many ways. We have to pray if we trust HIM to help us and to practice to forget the past and immerse in meditation to attain the peace. The third stanza- clue: Love neglected or rejected or deceived has won the love and life indeed by ascending the axis of universe as much as reaching the God to get his love and peace by leaving the worldly trash and by oppressing the depression with song of heaven. 4 th stanza: What ever happens by virtue of time and fate, let it be and we are still safe between birth and death. I hope you will appreciate my explanation. Bye R K CHOWDARY

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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