EROTICA

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  • joanna
  • After a 3 year hiatus, am back...... hope its worth it.

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Just found these scriptures that fit EROTICA so well......Proverbs 2:16-19, Proverbs 5:3-8, Proverbs 7:5-27.

EROTICA

Whispering her name, as one in rhythm, is such a Pleasure,
Wanting more than enough from her is always a Pain,
She will give you satisfaction, its without Measure,
That is her mission and its vividly Plain,
At the centre of her lengths lies a beautiful Treasure,
Everyone wants it and would die for its Gain,
The sweetness of her depth, such thrust! the Pressure!!
You wish to experience it again and Again,
Her moundful peaks has the taste of the exotic for Sure,
Kissing them,an act one mustn't do in Vain,
Liquid fire she is, ignites you in through her Embrasure,
Such carnality makes you more sinful than Cain,
A glutton for her passion, lusting comes at every Leisure,
She's Desire,she's Erotica and temptation is her Main.
But be careful,she'll drag you to Hell,of that I can Assure,
For death becomes her, she's the grave and there you'll be lain.

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FranzJ commented on EROTICA

12-18-2010

Hey Joanna- I seem to be having trouble sending you a private message - sorry to do this route - yes you can "hang" on to me as long as you want. Thanks for wanting to do so. Frank

joanna

12/21/2010

its okay.............i got them.

FranzJ commented on EROTICA

12-08-2010

Lust at its best - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

joanna

12/16/2010

Music man, hey there........thanx for that comment. Am glad you said so.

Tauremini commented on EROTICA

11-27-2009

The heart races from just reading this. Allluring and vivid. Spectacular writing. Thank you (and please keep it coming) -Brett.

joanna

11/27/2009

Thank you Brett, am glad you liked it. Hope you have a nice weekend!! Joanna

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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