ESOTERIC TEARS

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    THROUGH ALL MY LIFE I HARDLY EVER CRIED,IT WAS HARD AND I SUPPOSE TOO MUCH PRIDE!!! BUT THERE CAME A DAY WHEN IT ALL SET IN JUST HOW SELFISH IT HAD BEEN,AND WHEN IT BROKE WHAT A RELEIF TO KNOW I REALLY WAS HUMAN!!!

    ESOTERIC TEARS

    do tears belong to A chosen few
    should I  hide
    when the hurt is more than I've ever knew
    emotions... are they for a chosen few
    so confused while holding back
    there are no answers of what to do
    suddenly  they began to flood
     I remembered the one ..who's tears turned to blood
    now I look upon the past
    supposing this would be my last
    life doesnt work this way
    when the ones you Love
    all go away
    I have found this to stand true
    tears aren't for just a chosen few




     

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    kdarcy commented on ESOTERIC TEARS

    11-20-2010

    Well said my friend, I will try and stay in better touch. I have several up if you find a moment, you may enjoy "No Winners " be well k

    Qualin

    03/22/2012

    THANK YOU MY FRIEND!!!

    ApaqRasgirl commented on ESOTERIC TEARS

    08-15-2010

    I know your pain in this one dear.....I have cried many, many tears for my love that is gone from me now, but now it is easier as I find him visiting me in my dreams each night, so now they no longer hurt so bad to think of him for I know we will be together again.........loved this write dear.........the rhythm flowed very well.......great piece.......loves ya asha

    Qualin

    08/15/2010

    I KNOW FULLY ABOUT THE DREAMS..I'M SURE IT'S GODS WAY OF ASSURANCE..AND I AM SORRY FOR YOUR LOSS IT RECIENTLY HAS BECOME A MONTHLY THHING FOR ME..JUST LOST ONE OF MY BEST FRIENDS AND THERE IS A UNREPLACABLE VOID..THANK YOU SO MUCH..GOD BLESS QUALIN

    ApaqRasgirl

    08/15/2010

    I know your pain dear, and I know that with a little time it will get easier, but it will never fully go away, but you will again be able to remember your friend with a smile instead of tears.......love asha

    Teardrops commented on ESOTERIC TEARS

    07-30-2010

    You couldnt write if you couldnt feel . A write really great .Loved the poem and if truth be told i cry to . Great write Marie

    Qualin

    08/15/2010

    knowledge of the chosen few...some time is better off exposed!!! thanks my friend

    connsk8 commented on ESOTERIC TEARS

    07-27-2009

    never be afraid to feel whether it be to laugh, to cry to smile...feelings are what make you human, emotions are what make you compassionate...it's what make good artists, GREAT!!!

    Qualin

    07/10/2010

    A VERY HIGH HONOR COMING FROM YOU THANK YOU SO MUCH...QUALIN

    Tempy commented on ESOTERIC TEARS

    07-27-2009

    i like this one. often if i cry i get into trouble like i'm not alowed and i'm being selfish but you can't stop once you start nice poem

    Qualin

    07/10/2010

    THANKS TEMPY YOU KNOW WELL HOW I FEEL ABOUT YOUR COMMENTS!!!!QUALIN

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