Estival Grins

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http://www.thefreedictionary.com/estival Okay so this is about the wedding preception my folks held.. The wedding is thursday, but it's very small, so they held a huuuuge party... It was cool.. This is about a daughter of my dads best friend.

Estival Grins

Silky sun drifts lazily through
the soft Sunday air
as sounds of an incoming life together
smile down upon our laughter.
Old family, the ones you barely remember,
the ones you've not seen for years,
old family friends,
the ones your dad went to college with
and the kind who held your stepmom when she cried,
maybe after failing a high school course.
Good food is on plenty a table, 
and good music surrounds your feeling of light.
A few men have poles for fishing, 
a few kids with youth glinting
in their baby blues.
The grass tickles ankles, coquettely kissing
bare toes, nails painted light pink.
A certain blonde sweetheart,
maybe three years of age, 
catches my eye and holds my hand.
She asks sweet questions and clings to me,
tucks a freshly picked dandelion behind my ear.
She wraps me in a tight, smooth hug,
the kind only simply naivete can bring.
This perfect, perfect being wants only
to hold together a broken heart.
While I'm just hoping she wont turn out like us.

 

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Viper89 commented on Estival Grins

05-22-2011

Wickedly good poem! Light at first but Heavy at the end, just like a good writer!

brokenhearted11

05/24/2011

thank you!

Tyme commented on Estival Grins

04-12-2011

Heavy ending. Great nostalgia! I felt like getting out of this flourescent-lit office and getting in the sun! I sould see all the people having a good time! Memories and stories! Great write. Great punch to the gut at the end!

brokenhearted11

04/12/2011

Thank you! I'm pretttty damn good at nostalgia, I'll say that much.. And I'm glad it gave that feeling. When I reread it, it makes me wanna go back out into the springtime and the calling humidity... Anyways, thanks again, and the ending's quite a slap after an easygoing ride.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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