Eternal

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    Poem Commentary

    I personally love this poem because of the myriad of emotion in the boy. At the same time that he is telling her he loves her, a joyful moment, he is realizing that it will never last, which is the most terrible realization a boy in his position can possibly have. Tragically beautiful, I suppose.

    Eternal

    My heart flutters
    Dancing in my chest
    I've finally said it
    Those three words

    How those eyes gaze
    Piercing so softly
    With her rosy cheeks
    And delicate smile

    She whispers to me
    Just four words more
    Oh, if only it could be
    An eternal love...

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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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