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Written for exceptional women, And once in a life time Love.

Eve

When the word Love was defined,
It could never equate,
to the feelings that live inside of me for you.

From the very first day that I saw you,
I knew my life long love was born.
Honey our ship has seen some dark waters,
and some frightening storms.

And I know if you had not been there with me
my ship would have crashed upon the rocks.
Your love my beautiful Wife
cuts right through the clouds
so I could see.

And the sparkle in your eyes,
when I look at you;
are like the stars to guide me
when there seems to be no light.

So mostly my love,
I take this occasion to tell you what I feel every day
and that is, that,
I love you more than these words could ever say. 
And may the Lord bless me to sail with you the rest of my Life. 

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Wakeitha commented on Eve

04-17-2012

What so beautiful and amazing words, I know you wife loves those words that came from her husband. I drifted in the wind and on the sail boat of the words.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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