Everlasting Freindship

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    Everlasting Freindship

    Everlasting Freindship





    There is never enough time to share


    Or impart all the feelings


    One gains throughout the years


    Yet every now and then


    We come across one we can share our tears.





    Strong ties bind those who are looking


    And those that are passing breifly here


    And each day we grow in learning


    Of freindships growing dear.





    Not just one but many lives


    Are touched by things we do


    But not as much as those we love


    Like how I feel about you.





    Everlasting friendships grow


    And as the saying states


    Freindships last forever when


    Our hearts are open gates.

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    wildpendigus commented on Everlasting Freindship

    07-01-2009

    Very good it is unique in title and content as you know that what makes a poem or song the lyrical content along with a good title will determine weather or not it will make it or not, I think you a bit of talent ! Congratulations WP

    purpleswan

    07/11/2009

    Thank you very much for your comments.

    origionalmerlin commented on Everlasting Freindship

    04-24-2009

    your others arent being rated a solid 10 by anyone else that reads them...andrew (see previous first)

    origionalmerlin commented on Everlasting Freindship

    04-24-2009

    (yes) a 10 again for these reasons..i am not competing with anyone but me, so i am not afraid so i am not afraid me giving an honest high rate will cut my own throat in a weekly contest lol, also if i like it i dont hold back, if i dont, its my tastes interfeering and i rate for and by other factors, and if tomthing is so offencive, id rather be honest and not rate or comment at all. (guess i am just insulted and dissappointed that this one and

    dahlusion commented on Everlasting Freindship

    03-20-2009

    Beautiful, simply beautiful.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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