Everlasting Night

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Thoughts that fill my mind can be all so unkind...

Everlasting Night

I look in the mirror and what do I see
 nothing but a stranger that looks back at me..
 I know not of her intentions, what she will do next..
 Her eyes stare deep into mine,
playing mind games all so unkind
 leading me to death as my only option to releave the stress in my mind... and they say death can be so unkind,
 but really its a god scent in my mind....
 Goodbye stranger in the mirror..
Goodbye bright sun light..
 Hello my darling, my everlasting night.

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Ninjaboy commented on Everlasting Night

04-22-2011

its good baby, it really is, but no need to write so depressingly =P be happyand jolly like.. like.. MMMEEEE!!!!!!!

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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