Everything's Changed She Said

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Everything's Changed She Said

"Everything's changed," she said.

 

I tried to resist the obvious question, but couldn't help myself, "What do you mean"?

 

"Well...things are different now, and I don't think they'll ever be the same."

 

"What's different?" I asked.

 

"My God, do I have to spell it out? Do I have to explain everything?" her pitch ascending.

 

"Well, I'm just trying to understand," I said matter-of-factly.

 

Her face turned crimson. "This is exactly what I'm talking about...the world changes and you just stand there and act like nothing's happened. It's infuriating"!

 

"The world...what world are you referring to?" I was mystified.

 

"If you don't know, there's no point in discussing it further."

 

"Discussing what further? I still don't know what we're talking about"!

 

She leveled the darkest shades of her eyes at me. "That's precisely the problem, you never know what we're talking about. How convenient for you"!

 

I was pissed. "Convenient? Nothing about this conversation is convenient. Why don't you just tell me what set you off"?

 

"Why - so you can fix it"?!

 

"Well, try and make it better anyway."

 

Her eyes went buggy. "You're not listening to me...everything's changed -- it can't be fixed -- nothing is going to make it better"!

 

I surveyed the room for trap doors and hidden cameras. "What the hell am I supposed to do"?

 

Is this it? It seems like we've been existing in alternate galaxies. Maybe she's right, maybe everything has changed.

 

"Why don't you just come over here and hold me?" she said, her voice now soft and sultry.

 

I studied her from across the room. She looked like an alien. I wondered how she could be so repulsive and attractive at the same time. My body obediently moved closer and I commanded my reluctant arms to encircle her.

 

"Mmmmm...much better," she whispered. "I love you."

 

"I love you too."

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shannie76 commented on Everything's Changed She Said

10-30-2009

This is good! I felt like I was there. Very captivating. I like your writing style.

zorbica

11/12/2009

shannie - what more could i ask for? tysm

dahlusion commented on Everything's Changed She Said

10-11-2009

This piece is obvious in that you are seriously missing a lover that you demanded too much from, or that you tried to control in a disturbingly jealous way, or you thought of her as naive, even childish…all in all, this is a perfectly written prose piece.

zorbica

11/12/2009

seriously missing - yes. ty for your thoughtful commentary

graceladymn commented on Everything's Changed She Said

10-09-2009

Inspiring, yet from my observations it works both ways, he too comes along like that, "there are changes" and so on, baffling. Maybe its not a male, female thing, rather a human thing, the frustrations of explaining mindisms in ways other can grasp without fear or trepidation, not a mars or venus thing rather an earth thing.

zorbica

11/12/2009

thank you gracelady ~ i'm really not sure myself

knight4696 commented on Everything's Changed She Said

10-04-2009

Sorry - but it begs to question ... Is it Hormones or what?! :) I love the coversational flow - Damn felt like I was there listening - like a fly on the wall. Very Real!!! This is why I think we all - Men and Women - should read the book Women are from Venus - Men are from Mars - This must be addressed in there??? :) Great read and saved to faves. A definate 10!

zorbica

10/04/2009

i was hoping for a fly on the wall - perfect - thanks

SavVySam commented on Everything's Changed She Said

10-01-2009

Wow...sounds kinda familiar! lol (uncomfortable chuckle at my expense not yours) Must be our ages. Regardless of the endless transitions in everyday life, for you the involuntarily moving closer indicates that at least in your hearts there will be an anchoring safe haven for each other. Love abides all. Good work.

zorbica

10/01/2009

Thank you for your thoughtful comments. This was not an actual conversation, but inspired by a past relationship I was missing.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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