EXILE MAN

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    EXILE MAN
    As a Robin longs for the summer rays
    so is i for your days.
    day and nite i weep and tears are but mine companion
    my heart breaks when i of you do recall here in exile.
    my foes laugh behind my back for the loss of my love..
    why? such pain and suffering..
    send thy words and truth,
    may they lead and bringth forth to thy cottage under thy embrace
    you be the source of mine Happiness and with mine strings,
    shall fill the Air with sweet Melodies...
    O! pardon this souls banishment.

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    mykhail commented on EXILE MAN

    02-19-2009

    Magati, This poem is very eloquent and unique! I loved it, a few misspellings, and this may be why some people rated it low, but I look at the inspiration, detail, meaning, ect., plus you are not native to this country, I take that into consid. also. I really liked it, gave it a 10, for the others who didn't, this shows lack of inteligence and meaning of character. Great Job!
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