exit

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    exit
    A spectacle of sorts dances before me in a ballerina lit courtyard
    I feel the flesh of my lover cling tightly against my chest like a shard
    A one way exhibit of spiritual phenomenon greets me in the west and seats me in the east
    A fantastic array of condiments and silverware await me for the feast
    Emotional yet distorted am i really so deep and drawn away that I've crumbled ?
    Due to fatigue and misery it's mystery how i still stand after so long I've tumbled
    But, I remain as shameful as i sway i just don't ever seem to dissipate
    I'll keep to my right and follow the signs to the soul I feed and my restless fate


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    royston commented on exit

    08-25-2013

    again- poetic-no form though-you really must get a book on the craft then you can ignore most of it but not all?
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    jadienblu

    05/10/2016

    I've studied poetry and literature my whole life

    redbloodink commented on exit

    12-23-2009

    such power and devotion to yourself...... seems very subdued and just existing..... but I see so much love here even tho it maybe underlying and love not reciprocated will flow back to you and soften and purify your soul...... red
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    cmlestrade commented on exit

    07-23-2009

    Nice reading,a little awkward until I reread a couple of times but very good just the same.
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    jadienblu

    07/23/2009

    thank you...i actually edited it b/c i messed up a lil hurry i was....ty all the same ...i guess i am a bit bit awkward until reread....

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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