Exit Earth

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Exit Earth

Eventually, you can rip a Place open-

and then dive,

just beyond the curve of shadow,

where stone and sky collide.

 

Cracks in the horizon - goddesses.

They demand you dance or

the Pointing tree will betray the clouds,

revealing where they have been

weakened.

 

I sway from a wind spent tree,

clinging to the dead

for what seems,  now

an eternity.

Carom off water pitted dirt,

carving out the scars

that are sure to be

harbingers.

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gogant commented on Exit Earth

03-26-2010

Another masterpiece, Kimberly......you are simply amazing......

Tinytree commented on Exit Earth

03-02-2010

Hmmm.....I've seen, I believe and I am jealous still. Great imagery.

Artie commented on Exit Earth

01-10-2010

Very interesting write. I love the imagery, and the feelings you express in this. 10 from me

Charlie23 commented on Exit Earth

12-26-2009

This is a very interesting write! I'll admit I had to break out the dictionary a couple times, with that I found it to be very surreal, and then a saw the tag. Perfect!

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

KimberlySD’s Poems (10)

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