Faceless they become

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  • Life......

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    I could only write this because I was Homeless..... Treat people better .... you never know who they are or what they will become......

    Faceless they become




    Will you go away.....
    You ask me...
    No where to stay....
    I hit the streets....

    I'll roam the roads.....
    I'll pick up trash...
    Wear the same clothes...
    Do with out cash....

    Homeless,jobless,faceless...
    I have become.....
    I live a life....
    I work, but called a bum...

    People stare.....
    Like I'm a desease....
    I refuse to cry a tear.....
    Dear:God please!

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    BoSweets commented on Faceless they become

    02-02-2010

    this is so true and sad the world has come to this. Keep sharing. Peace BoSweets

    redbloodink

    02/02/2010

    ty again Sweets .... it is sad.....

    Infect commented on Faceless they become

    01-31-2010

    Deep and flowing. A picture painted of the real world and the tradgedies within. Well done

    redbloodink

    01/31/2010

    ty Infect... I try to paint the best pic I can with my lonely words of truth and decency.........

    MarionYost commented on Faceless they become

    01-31-2010

    Love this and it's the truth. Great write Red, I Love this one. All the best -Marion-

    redbloodink

    01/31/2010

    ty Marion..... so true and sad.......

    MarionYost

    01/31/2010

    Definitely sad, and what's worse, is NO ONE seems to care, they'd rather look down their hypocritical noses than help =(.

    kage commented on Faceless they become

    01-31-2010

    good work nice flow of words i like it and think you have done a great job it is easily understood

    redbloodink

    01/31/2010

    ty Kage I do appreciate your comments....

    Teardrops commented on Faceless they become

    01-31-2010

    You show you inner strength in all you write great poem my friend Thanks Marie

    redbloodink

    01/31/2010

    ty Tear..... glad you like it.....

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