Failure

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Failure

I'm a failure.

I continue to dissappoint myself.
And others as well...

Another mark left to show...
Don't look.

I close my eyes...
and i try to imagine the good things that happen in life.

But im too blind to see any.

So I keep writing stupid blogs,
Just so I still have something to say.

Hoping my feelings will stay intact.

But soon they will corrupt.
And I will fade...

I already am..

Im trying to make things better.
But i keep messing up anyways.

Sometimes I want to give up.
But I just end up promising another person that I won't.

That makes...1,2,3.....no,
Too many to count.

So this is what i do to occupy myself.
Not that it works.

Its temporary.

Don't tell me I'm stupid or dumb,
Don't ask me if I'm okay
Because i'm not!

And don't ask me if I will be okay,
Because I won't!

And don't ask me if I need someone to talk to,
Because I don't!

I didn't ask.
I didn't speak.
And I didn't look!

So do me a favor and let me mess up my life.

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Rhymer commented on Failure

02-12-2010

Your life is yours to do with as you please, but you can overcome and be the person you want to be. The real you is hiding behind your words I think. Well written with lots of emotion. 10 from me.

Ivelisse

02/12/2010

Thank you. That's why i love poetry. I usually write when my feelings are so strong. And later on when my feelings are mellow I read what I wrote and it seems so different.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

Ivelisse’s Poems (24)

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It Killed Her 2
False 5
Mad Person 4
Failure 1
Time is Lost 2
He Saved Me 2
Lost Angel 3
Whisper 1
Darkness of Enlightenment 1
Blank 2
Change Me 1
New Years Loner 1
She's the Perfect Definition 7
It's No Longer A Dream 1
No Such Thing 1
Death Note 3
Don't Promise Me 1
Silence 1
Save me 2
Afraid 1
Anna's Story 2
A Mother's Love Denied 1
Fantasy Boy 0