Fair Maiden's Song

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Fair Maiden's Song

once was a man from hell he rose
bring war upon all man, his foes
from dawn til dusk, he pillaged and killed
taking on soldiers with weapons, all skilled

he wandered into a new land
where no blade met death by his hand
there lay the lady, shrouded in white
his eyes, blistering, at the beautiful sight

she whispered and cooed him, walking at them
the voices of hell, extinguished by sin
she forgave and blessed him for everything they did
he took her, and lived forever, or so it is said

one day many years ago, she died of old age
the armies of hell went into a rage
their leader, the man hell arose
he declared, again, men were his foes

summoning his soldiers, he conquered again
only to be defeated by his enemy; man
slowly dieing, returning to fire haven
his name was satan, declaring his new foe, heaven!

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emokid commented on Fair Maiden's Song

12-23-2009

omg that was amazing. i dont think i could ever write anything so amazing. your rhyming is majorly wicked

EvilPoems

01/01/2010

thank you ^.^

PoetsofBlood commented on Fair Maiden's Song

12-21-2009

My favorite is the title, I love the rhymes, rose/ foes, very good, ;) Alexia

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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