Fake Or True

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  • SweetBlood
  • Wasn't it beautiful running wild 'till you fell asleep? 'Till the monsters caught up to you

Fake Or True

Yeah I look at my friends.

Really I wonder what I see.

I see true ones and fake ones.

Have to choose what they’ll be.

Let the fake ones go.

Hold the true ones close.

Cause all the fake ones will do is betraye  me, backstab me.

Seriously they bring drama.

The fake ones really do.

They make me depressed.

They just don’t stay true.

But my true friends stand beside me through thick and thin.

They help me back together.

Their family.

So now I must sit here and figure out who’s real and who’s not.

Because I don’t need pain to handle my thoughts.

I stare at my friends now.

I hope you guys aren’t fake because If you are you better step up to this plate.

You better start being true cause you only get one chance and once you break than we’re through.

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dahlusion commented on Fake Or True

11-17-2009

"You better start being true cause you only get one chance and once you break than we’re through" — the honesty and the power in this line is so rich in feelings.

cliftondurant commented on Fake Or True

11-09-2009

you will know who your real friend are because they will be there for you always who need a fake friends nice poem thanks for sharing

n9ne commented on Fake Or True

11-06-2009

i like the fake or true theme... but somewhere along the way it sounds more personal n directed to a particular someone... but in overall... i like... keep up the good work

MOMofTWINS commented on Fake Or True

11-06-2009

It takes alot to stand up and decide your just not going to let fake people be apart of you anymore. Its a hard thing to do but it will be so worth it... So put your bullshit-detector in high gear and sift through your friends to find the ones who really care about you... Good luck hon and wonderful poem. (:

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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