Fallen Star

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  • Papa
  • Sitting, waiting on the world to turn

Poem Commentary

Just a song/poem that hit me on the way home from work. I am not sad ,I just write that way. My dad woke me every morning when I was a kid with some Hank Williams song on the record player. He didn't like my KISS albums.

Fallen Star

My how things have changed these days,
from the way they used to be.
From always in your loving arms,
 to there's never time for me.
I was your hero once.
I was your friend.
Now my heros' cape is tattered,
and the friendships sailed again.
 
I ate my Wheaties every morning,
and I worked hard at the gym.
I thought it was muscles that you wanted,
but you preferred them sick and slim.
Yea I tried my hand at drinking,
but I wasn't home there at the bar.
While I sat there pining for you,
you're fogging windows in a car.

You used to be my Northern star,
guiding me every night,
down the hallway to our bedroom,
where you'd turn out the lights.
I hear you're still shining these days,
but you're a distant shooting star.
Twinkling somewhere near a street light,
and I still wonder where you are.

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carynontherhine commented on Fallen Star

08-05-2010

Papa, I love this one!! It is full of meaning. A love that was his star, not now but still wondering where his star is. Sad. Lovely write and definitely a ten! OMG I just looked below and my son is so funny. Long winded. Ha! But really, this is beautiful.

angel33614 commented on Fallen Star

07-29-2010

ona second reading I feel this poem is directed at a certain person, someone who used to be the star that filled your eye and an angel in the sky but now has fallen from from the graces of purity and light. Sin originally created the fallen angel, I feel this is what caused your fallen star, perhaps. A broken bond of affection and love. Even though the relationship has ended the love remains as you will always hold it dear to your heart's keep. A lost love never returning and a star that shines in a very different light... Very sad. Purity of the soul, journey well!!! Angel aka The poem buster

angel33614 commented on Fallen Star

07-29-2010

Beautiful poem with a very hearfelt touching story, perfect flow in form and grace. Could easily be a song or poem, but really what is the difference, poetry in the motion of life! The emotions of the poem flow from the words and straight into the heart of the reader. Great write my new friend, bravo! Purity of the soul, journey well!!! Angel

MootPoint commented on Fallen Star

07-29-2010

I like this one. It has nice rhythm and tells a story. It also has a good ending. I guess you can say that for many old friends. You wonder where and what there doing now.

bluskyinthenite commented on Fallen Star

07-21-2010

very sweet. You were once my Northern Star. Now you twinkle in someone else's eyes. Love is berried deep. Never forget my Love

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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White Noise 2
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Franks In Stein 7
The Love Not Taken 7
? 12
Thinking of You Only 11
Walking Home Alone 8
Passion, Love , Romance 6
Out of touch 7
Dead Man Inside 14
bird song 11
O P 11
Fallen Star 17
Grace 6
Contemplating Winter 5
It Just Takes Time 4
Midnight Rider 7
Rockabye.Baby 7
Bully for You 8
Picture Me 7
Should I Just Kiss You 12
Tear Drop 9
It Should Be So Easy 7
Hair 18
I've been hurt 7
what 4
Insanity 3
wake me please 1
Sorry. 13
What Gives 6
Fall of Eden 11
Touch 10
Rhyme 3
Up in Smoke 1
Can Anyone Hear Me 5
I'm Lost 4
Why Do You Pet The Kitty? 6
Leave Me Alone 4
Left Field Fly 1
A Match Gone Wild 2
Pay Back 2
Imagine if You Will. 3
Balloon Envy 6
Watching Mama Get A Tan 7
I Miss This 2
Satans Forest 3
Marble Stone 10
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If I Cry Now 5
Anniversary Day 2
You Should Of 3
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No Windows 3
Hell 3
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Your Eyes 3
ASUNDER 3
FINISHED 1
When You Paint The Town 3
My Promise 3
Goodbye 9