Fallen

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  • Friendship

    Poem Commentary

    This poem was to my best friend, sadly he had to move to New York.  I've known him since the 7th grade, he was 18yrs old when I was 14...some might've called this 'puppy love', but I am more mature than most people my age, at least that's what I'm told..

    Fallen

    I have fallen for someone so true

    And sweetheart of course it’s you

    This may be inappropriate but what can I do

    Age doesn’t matter for I really love you

    It’s wonderful to say how good I feel

    I can’t believe it it’s so unreal

    Each time I’m with you, each moment we share

    It shows how much you really care

    You are so very special and sweet

    One look at you and I feel weak

    It’s your charm that sets me on fire

    And all through the night it’s you I desire.

    I have fallen deeply for you

    I hope you have fallen in love with me too.

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    butgadiana’s Poems (5)

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