FallenAngel

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    FallenAngel
    Sometimes she cries but she doesn't feel.
    Sometimes she feels but she doesn't care.
    When she cares it hurts and the pain is too real, alone is better it curbs all the fear.
    The little girl deep inside is shy and still needs to hide. The only people she needed were never by her side. Instead they were doing things to hurt her and make her fear. It's harder now than ever for her to let anybody near.
    She wants to cry out, to yell, to scream. No one is there to listen, she can't be heard or seen.
    Maybe one day she can start to crack away at the shell. For now it's got her locked in her own personal hell.

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    magicmanzz commented on FallenAngel

    08-03-2009

    ilike the way u write please read mine we almost write alike been where u are and what doesn't kill u makes u stronger mark
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    poet4dasoul commented on FallenAngel

    07-08-2009

    This poem is intensely written in the essence of pain, and I can truly relate. We all look different on the outside but have the same basic wants and needs on the inside. This poem has fire and fire is wisdom; so when we make it pass the storm and our flames burn brighter don't let extinguisher type ppl douse the flame. Know the characters of those type by their actions, and test those who come into your circle: emotionally, mentally, and spiritually. Only give enough to ensure that you still have some for yourself. There's nothing wrong with selfish healthiness, and this is the solution to our pain; because believe it is shared. thank you poet for that one it is truly felt; peace.
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    PRober commented on FallenAngel

    07-02-2009

    I think that's a situation we all deal with sometimes.. well written!
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    tenderpoison commented on FallenAngel

    06-26-2009

    I walk the path beside you...a sister to your pain and every word you've said...I've said the same.
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    fallenangel74

    06/28/2009

    Thank you. It means a lot to have ppl around who understand. Stay strong and dont let anybody tell you what you can and cant do.

    TommyT commented on FallenAngel

    06-14-2009

    I found this to be a particularly moving piece. And, although it references the girl inside, I feel I can connect to the feelings expressed. It's very easy to feel alone, even when surrounded by people constantly, especially those we love. It's harder to break that shell as each day passes and the screaming inside becomes louder and louder. Excellent poetry!
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