falling down

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    falling down

     i see you falling down
    crumbling to the floor
    and i don't know
    how to help you

    you never tell me
    anything anymore
    what is going on
    i really need to know

    you're sinking to the bottom
    of the ocean
    and we don't know
    how to save you

    you're going futher down
    to the point where
    no one can save you
    not even me

    i'm starting think
    you don't want to be saved
    maybe you need to fall
    in order to get back up

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    ScarletDeath7 commented on falling down

    05-21-2012

    I like this a lot, it reminds me of one of my best friends. The end is my favorite: "maybe you need to fall / in order to get back up". Anyway, great write.
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