Falling for you

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    Falling for you
    I love the way you make me feel;
    Around you my heart seems to heal.
    I long to hear your voice;
    But I feel I have no choice,
    But to wait
    For that one date.
    Many things can happen or change between us,
    But at this point in time my focus
    Is on you and nothing more.
    You might not know this for sure,
    But I’m falling for you;
    This is completely true.
    I love the way your eyes
    Take me by surprise;
    I love the way your voice
    Leaves me no choice,
    But to smile
    And all the while
    I’m falling deeper still.
    It has always been a thrill
    To live on the edge,
    But this is my pledge;
    “I will remain true
    And love only you.”

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    prissy03 commented on Falling for you

    01-19-2010

    I love this one.. kinda sounds like us when we first started talking only able to hear my voice and see pic's of me.. but anyways i really love it.. you just made me think about us..
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    Keiko commented on Falling for you

    08-12-2009

    Just read this one, and have to agree with coach you sure do write great stuff!
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    keithrberryjr

    08/12/2009

    thank you for your comments.they help a lot

    minigirl695 commented on Falling for you

    08-06-2009

    Oh wow. These are loving words to read. =) It's very sweet and passionate and loving. I really like this one, it's bright. ~{@ Lia Cake @}~
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    coach commented on Falling for you

    05-27-2009

    Omg!!! U should be a song writter.The words you write are amazing....You have to be my favorit poet in here...
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    keithrberryjr

    08/06/2009

    thank you for your comments.They are very helpful in letting me know that Im doing a good job.

    heartbreaker69 commented on Falling for you

    03-30-2009

    this poem is AWESOME lol whoever you wrote it for is one lucky girl! tell her that for me yea? lol
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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