Falling Into Fate

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    The mystery of tomorrow and no fate set in stone.

    Falling Into Fate

    Days fade out of control,
    like time against infinity
    the night is still with radiance,
    and the stars are still with certainty.
    Tommorow is anything but inevitable
    like fate making itself known,
    as we fall into it's eternity,
    as we fall into our own.

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    spbsdude commented on Falling Into Fate

    10-13-2009

    Given the ratings I have viewed as I have made my own ratings, I also think you are underappreciated and perhaps those who have left comments doen't really understand your poetry. I do and I appreciate your talent. Keep up the good work.

    spbsdude commented on Falling Into Fate

    10-13-2009

    Who can know their own fate, or is it destiny. This poem flows so beautifully. I love the picture of the full moon that accompanies it. I also love the way you are so expressive and deep in so few words. That alone is a talent, and you are very talented.

    langrock commented on Falling Into Fate

    11-20-2008

    I really like the flow of this poem, a very nice end as well.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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