Falling

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  • Confusion

    Poem Commentary

    this is just a poem that i thought of while i was on a roller coaster. when we were going down a very steep track. i hope you all like it

    Falling

    I am running

    then all of a sudden

    I am free

    falling from somewhere

    going anywhere

    as I fall

    I just think

    of my lives past

    of my life with all my problems.

    Then I juat think

    of my future

    of my new problem free life.

    I hope the past

    will never come again

    then all of a sudden

    I stop falling

    and as I look around

    I am in

    the same place

    as before.

    I guess

    my probemswill

    never leave me

    and I can't

    fall away

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    Mandi commented on Falling

    12-15-2009

    not bad for as young as you are, my poetry should be so mature as yours. if you keep this up you may end up in an anthology of classic poetry somewhere
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    redbloodink commented on Falling

    12-03-2009

    Sk8 this was a great poem........ I know the feeling of falling back...... Red......
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    blindmaster commented on Falling

    08-22-2009

    Reminds me of falling in a bottomless pit! You have matured in your poem writing and it can only get better if you are dedicated
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    knight4696 commented on Falling

    08-21-2009

    Font and grammatics aside - A wonderful poem - a great relaese of emotion from such a talented young woman. Keep writing & be free.
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    jj1562 commented on Falling

    08-21-2009

    I know what you mean. I wish I could just leave all my problems behind as I fall.
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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