Falling

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    Falling

    I feel you hands lifting me up

    To help me fly above the clouds

    Excitement rushes through my veins

    Ecstasy is in my blood

    Sending me to a level so high

    That it seems I will

    Plummet to my death if you let me fall

    You drop me onto feathers and

    Caress me gently.

    With touches as soft as the rays

    Of the sun.

    I want you to take me to this

    Place and take me now!

    And please don’t stop!

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    seasonz commented on Falling

    08-16-2009

    i loved the poem. you understand the meaning and yet the writiing is tastefully done. kudos

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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