Falling

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    Falling

    The air has long since turned cold
    Jack Frost whistles his tune ahead
    He’ll be here much too soon
    I don’t know what will become of me
    When he arrives

    My brothers and sisters
    They’ve already given up
    Let go and drifted away
    The trip looks fun
    But I could never get back
    And I’m safe up here
    So I think I’ll just say

    The trip looks fun
    But so very scary
    Each of Jack’s puffs
    Threatening to blow me astray
    And the ground looks so soft
    But with all the passing people
    I fear I’d just get crushed

    There is this one particular patch of grass
    Oh, there I’d love to rest my weary stem
    And Jackie’s winds are blowing stronger
    Wait, what am I thinking – I can’t give in!

    The weeks pass and Jack is here
    He’s building a castle in the clouds, settling in
    I toss and I turn as I wrestle with him
    Buying time, postponing the inevitable
    See, I have this sneaking suspicion he’s going to win
    Unless I’m fittin’ to get ripped off this branch
    I think I just might have to jump

    Which, after all, might not be so bad
    Since there is that one particular patch of grass
    On which I would love to rest my weary stem

    As I’m pepping and prepping, the wind picks up
    Jackie flies by and rips me off my perch
    Picks me up and tosses me among his winds
    And laughs as I’m tossed astray
    Away from all the things I’ve ever wanted
    My roughed-up diamond in the rough
    That patch of grass I wanted to call my own

    But see, there’s a force none of us planned on
    A force stronger than my will and Jack combined
    Because I was mesmerized and he ran out of breath
    Leaving one unexpected thing left
    As his winds died down I fluttered toward the ground
    And landed on that very spot
    That one particular patch of grass
    For who was I – or even Jack – to compete with gravity?

    A girl braving the weather marches by
    Laughing as she digests the scene
    She sighs to no one in particular
    As she imagines thousands of leaves and petals
    All fluttering their crazed paths to individual patches of grass
    ‘Reminds me of falling in love…
    …Who is one mere soul to fight such a thing?’

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    Drivingczar commented on Falling

    04-08-2009

    Nice verses! Beautiful, creative writing!

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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