False Paradise

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It just kinda hit me from doing nothing and the word paradise just crossed my mind for a second and I laughed and said what is paradise.

False Paradise

Paradise what is paradise nothing more than a wasteland of false hopes and dreams.You hope for sanctity and in turn you get nothing but despair. Those who claim that your journey is not far lie and know nothing of the trials ahead. The goddess has forsaken me you and all of us. We are nothing more than dolls to her.

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