FAMILY

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  • CMarsh
  • Feeling much better now that I have found my purpose.

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This poem was inspired by all those who commented on my poems.
It made me think about family and what it means. The end rest is the poem I wrote because of my new family here. Thank you for everything you have given me great inspiration and happiness.

FAMILY

Family

By,

Clarence Marsh


What is a family?

Is it just having a mother and father or sister and brother

Or is it more?

A family is a unit that works together, plays together

and prays together,

A family will always be there in your time of need

With unconditional love and support.

But a family can be people or friends who are close too you

My family not only consists of the traditional family members…

It extends to all those who share my love and passion

 for a common goal

They too are also my family

I see no race, color or creed only people who are in need,

When we open our hearts and minds to all people

Our family can extend around the world

We all have ancestors that come from many parts of the world

They left their homeland in search of a better place

 To raise their family

Regardless of religion or race we all seek a better place

Where love for the human race has no face.

When you remove our skin and hair we are nothing more

But our skeletal remains

Made up of muscles, bones, tendons, fibers and veins

We all have a heart and brain

So I ask you now… are we all not the same?

These are the people that are my kin regardless of their skin…

But now that we don’t have our skin

Can you tell which ones are kin… If not

Are we not one Family?

 

 

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teasasue commented on FAMILY

09-14-2009

I completly agree cmarsh, well written and well spoken 10

CMarsh

09/14/2009

Thanks Teasasue! If others just believed the same thing the world would be a better place.

Madelynn commented on FAMILY

09-10-2009

You are a man of strong value and that shines with this piece you have shared!-Well stated,and very true.The stand you take here-that we love one another,because we are all simply human beings is definately one worth voicing!Thank you so much for inviting me to share these ideals with you!-

ILTWP commented on FAMILY

09-09-2009

By what you express in your writings, you are very much a caring father, as myself. Very good work, keep writing what you feel from your heart.

jammaekas commented on FAMILY

09-03-2009

Hi Clarence, This is the first of your poem that i read. A good description of what a family is. Very nice... Well, in fact, we all are blood related if we looked back from the beginning...

Lolee commented on FAMILY

08-28-2009

Awww....this is really nice. This is one of your better poems. I like it. No pathos here...just the facts ma'am. Keep up the good work...Uncle Clarence : )

CMarsh

08/29/2009

Thanks Lolee! I will try to keep them all real.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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Crossroads 11
ETERNAL LOVE'S GIFT 33
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Michael Jackson Tribute 12
Savage Garden Dedication 13
First Passionate Kiss 7
Even though we have never met 6
FAMILY 6
LOST LOVE 8
CHOICES 5
Hidden Truths 16
TRUTH 4
COMMITMENT 3
Hot Love 2
HOPE 3
The Key To My Heart 5
Unspoken Love 5
ABSENCE 7