Fated Truth

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    Fated Truth
    What is it,

     

    That attracts the eye?

     

    Is it beauty?……

     

    But that’s by and by.

     

    Is it the soul,

     

    That beckons you?

     

    Like minds enthrall,

     

    But what is true?

     

    Can it be

     

    The color of one’s eye,

     

    Or what’s beneath

     

    Where truth does lie?

     

    Can it be

     

    The shape one sees,

     

    Or does it fathom

     

    What’s beneath?

     

    Can such contrary

     

    Views be shared,

     

    Or is it by fate

     

    Two people are paired?

     

    What is it

     

    That makes me love you?

     

    It just is….

     

    It’s simply true.

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    Rygar commented on Fated Truth

    01-08-2010

    another beautifully written piece of art, the abstract concept of attraction, sometimes explainable and sometimes not, great write hun.
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    MindNumbing commented on Fated Truth

    01-08-2010

    I adore this! I've often asked myself the whys and hows of love... why did my feelings for this person develop and how did it happen so quickly... how is it that I've been able to keep him in my grasp for such a long time... what makes him feel the same. You wrapped it up perfectly... "It just is"! A great write!
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    BadBadBear commented on Fated Truth

    01-08-2010

    Utter brilliance to say the least! Another rare jewel has escaped your jewel box, to which there are many of your rare jewels on display!
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    MrGee commented on Fated Truth

    01-07-2010

    BRAVO! I love concise poems and this has quickly become one of my favorites. And such careful use of the metaphor is remarkable. Having now read two of your poems I have become a fan. Love at first sight overcame you and thus it has found release in the poem? 10
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    kpeery09 commented on Fated Truth

    01-07-2010

    Very beautiful once again my friend...keep up the good work. I give you 10
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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