Father and son

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    Father and son

    Like a river flowing into the ocean

    Is just like father and son

     

    They Bond with each other

    Hanging onto each other shoulder

     

    It’s a wonderful sight to see

     

    I love my father

    But my father and I are not close

     

    He left us one morning

    And now he’s out in the streets

     

    Without a stable home

     It’s a terrible place to be

     

    My father if you can hear me

    I want you to know that you left me

     

    It’s a sad world to live without a father

     

    But I went beyond and looked even higher

    For the man that created me

     

    Jesus is my father

    And for him one day I will soon be higher

    In a place beyond this world

     

    Heaven is a home where my father lives

    And I will soon one day join him

     

    Whenever he decides to call me

     

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    Starhawk commented on Father and son

    10-06-2009

    Please read 'Love is My Shepherd I shall not want' it was inspired by your thoughts in this poem, so please accept it as a gift of the Spirit to you.
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    almonord1990

    10/06/2009

    thank you

    MIKE3447 commented on Father and son

    10-04-2009

    THIS IS VERY TOUCHING, DO TO THE FACT THAT WE ALL LIVE WITHOUT A FATHER IN OUR LIFE. WORSHIP THIS PIECE AND GET IT OUT THERE TO ALL THOSE INDIVIDUALS THAT THINK THEY DO NOT HAVE A FATHER. GREAT JOB MICHAEL.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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