Father Of Love

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    • KAWK
    • Thinking about writting a new poem about strength

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    I love this.This is how I fee.The loud beats mean the people in the world.

    Father Of Love

     For he is the one
    For he who be
    The Father Of Love
    For sure the one
    Who holds the white dove
    For he the man who never lies
    For sure the one who clears up cries
    For He who needs
    To be the lead
    No matter and his faces
    The loud beats 
    For he is the one who never doubts 
    For he is the one who
    Smiles our thoughts
    For the one 
    who hears all
    To the one who creates the 
    The White falls
    No matter if you are here or there
    The Father Of Love 
    Will be near 




                                    Love
                                              KAWK 

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    Musicmynded1 commented on Father Of Love

    03-04-2011

    I like the style of the writing, the wonderful words within', its a great piece.
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    1990lh commented on Father Of Love

    07-18-2009

    wow that was a really great poem very beautiful poem great write
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    KAWK

    07/20/2009

    Thanks so was yours

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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