Fear Chasing


  • irielove
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Poem Commentary

Another dream that has haunted me. I had killed someone (i would never really do this), not sure who it was but he looked remarkably like my brother but was not. After i killed the person I just started running. My ex boyfriend was in the dream and tried to catch me. My best friend was in the dream as well and also tried to catch me, even my brother. My brother kept up with me but still didnt catch me. In this dream I ran all over the place, I ran day and night. Sometimes my dreams are confusing but it still helps me write. The dreams are new, not something that usually occurs in my life. I rarly remember my dreams but this one was very vivid and in great detail, yet still a dream!

Fear Chasing

I ran
I ran fast
I ran smart
Down Streets
Over hills
I jumped fences
and brick walls

My love could not catch me
My friend could not catch me
My brother kept pace
Yet still fell behind

and dementions
only mechanics
oblivious to others
inferior to myself

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HarverTomsson commented on Fear Chasing


Have you watched 'Inception?" Now, that's a bad dream! Harv

Musicmynded1 commented on Fear Chasing


Alot like me.. keep writing, its fantastic and raw... ( i hear songs in my dreams.. wake and pen words to em.. as there usually r no words just melody.. hence capturing dream melody)

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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