Fear for Death

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    Fear for Death

    I see it across the room
    The object that will lead my doom
    He looks at me and smiles with glee
    You should have chosen me
    He pulls the gun to my head
    I close my eyes
    Getting ready to die
    I dont think about the good times
    But more about all my lies
    I beg for forgiveness
    My mind in distress
    And time is done
    When he shoots the gun

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    origionalmerlin commented on Fear for Death

    04-20-2009

    good write.. excelent word choice and structure, enjoyable to read. and for a lot of other reasons well doen Poet!!! thanatopisis isnt half so good. post more of your poems please

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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