fear of falling

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    falling and catching myself
    leaning too far back in my chair
    being pulled backward by the hair

    failing at deep sleep
    seems to be at the root of my dreams
    falling like rain and thunder
    and the ironic twist of falling under

    falling and nursing such injuries
    the delicate and dirty decencies

    falling in love and catching myself 











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    Kingwebstar commented on fear of falling

    08-22-2012

    This post and you are awesome .Unique this poem is in it's on way.Excellent job Bravo Love Da KinG
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    Crush

    08/22/2012

    thank you very much and keep doing your thang !

    Kingwebstar

    08/22/2012

    I will and you too

    TheLastCowboy commented on fear of falling

    07-24-2012

    Wow i like how you paint the picture and tied the two together, very clever!!!! Great and straight to the point-awesome writing!
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    tierra7 commented on fear of falling

    06-20-2012

    My Sweet Poetic Friend, The more I read your heart , the more I find myself wrapped in your Royal Musings!!!!!.Courage, is Fear that has said it's prayers ♥. Love & Light, Tierra
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    Phission

    06/21/2012

    wow, i have never heard that "Courage" quote before. it's beautiful. is that yours ? please tell me it is. thank you for your kindest of words....you inspire me with your work andf your poetry.

    cheronld commented on fear of falling

    06-20-2012

    I don't know why, but....I feel like screaming at the top of my lungs.....LET GO....the fear itself is usually much deeper than the first step....sometimes its not nearly as bad....I tend to see unusual things in my head when reading writes such as yours....so if I am off base...so be it....This was a cute short but sweet sentiment from you....it was light in touch and I am glad that you did....HOWEVER....wouldn't it be nice to just jump and soar like the eagle....or running with reckless abandon....*smile*...Cher
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    Phission

    06/21/2012

    no, you are not off base. many of what i write is simply me getting out the frustrations in my little life that screams as it needs to. i lover your critiques and especially the kind words. i have jumped and soared with the eagles and feel ready to try again :)

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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