Fear's Cry

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    • DarkChi
    • Come look at the scares smother the heart opening up no more

    Poem Commentary

    i was thinking about how much i loved the rain when i wrote this...at the time i was...feeling very alone

    Fear's Cry

    I stand alone
    rain falling upon me
    my head is down
    hair wet and hanging in my face
    my eyes are shut
    I'm humming softly
    should you come to my side
    hear my sad lullaby
    see the tears fall with the rain
    you'd never understand
    you're just a friend
    you couldn't comprehend
    the trouble I'm in
    soaked down to the bones
    frozen cold and dead
    my hair down and wet
    and a sad lullaby
    upon my lips
    fear can cry
    and so can i
    the cliff's edge seems
    so near
    but i just
    stand
    alone
    humming a soft tune
    would you come and
    save me
    from my
    sad depressed self

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    Pat007 commented on Fear's Cry

    08-22-2009

    Very touching poem DC. I really liked it. Especiallly the ryhtum and your style. Thanks for sharing.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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