Feeling Blue

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Feeling down and out... but still hanging on to hope!

Feeling Blue

Sadness came over me

Tears began to flow

Hugged my pillow

Never wanting to let go

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Feelings of emptiness

Filled my heart

Words all jumbled

Unable to complete a thought

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What did I do?

To deserve all this pain

Most days I feel like

I have nothing to gain

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Lord, please put the sunshine

Back into my life

All these dark clouds

Are bringing me down

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Remembering back when

I was just a little girl

Daddy would hold me

He’d say cry it all out baby

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I have all the time in the world

For my little girl

If it takes all day

Then here we’ll stay

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I could have used

My daddy’s arms today

However, the Lord saw fit

To take him away

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Even though I felt so blue

I sensed an angel maybe two

Watching over me from heaven above

I miss you mama and daddy

And all your love

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~ Mary Eaton ~

© Copyright MAE 2010

 

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Tigcateyes commented on Feeling Blue

07-25-2010

This was easy to tell that it was from the heart and heartfelt. I too have lost my daddy and miss him so. Daddy's so have a way of being there when we really feel done. This is a wonderful poem, even though about being down. I look forwarded to reading more. Blessed Be.

Mareann

07/25/2010

Awe thanks... Yes, no matter how long he's been gone, he remains in my heart, I miss him so ..... Thank you dearly for reading and commenting... Mary

dahlusion commented on Feeling Blue

07-07-2010

a sparkling poetic gem in all of its transparent glitter. both of my parents died in the same year, making me an orphan. i feel you.

Mareann

07/13/2010

Thank you Dah... sorry for your loss as well. they are always in our hearts, but yes, it is easy to feel blue over such losses in our lives! I apreciate you stopping by my page and reading and leaving me a comment, means more than you know. Mary

gogant commented on Feeling Blue

07-07-2010

Is there anything so sad as a little girl wanting her dad to hold her because she is so lonely...and yet, so touchingly sweet...........A wonderful, endearing little poem.......................................gogant

Mareann

07/13/2010

Hey thanks, so much for reading and leaving me a comment. My dad meant the world to me, and mom too, i miss them terribly Mary

Teardrops commented on Feeling Blue

07-02-2010

IT is ok to be blue just dont stay blue go out see what nature is doing . Ever watch a rabbit hunt for food I make stories up about where they are going when i see one . Smile Mary your angels are watching . Great poem Marie

Mareann

07/03/2010

Thank you dearest Marie,,,,, Nature i one of the best cures for depression and the blues there is... And it's free for taking..... God loves us that much... He gave us whole world full of beauty, Thank you kindly, Mary

BlackButterfly1 commented on Feeling Blue

07-02-2010

I'm sorry that you're feeling blue but I think the poem is so sweet, especially the ending!

Mareann

07/02/2010

Thank you very kindly.... Mary

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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