feeling good

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    feeling good

     holiday, billie and blues
    music and embers up the flue
    dancing slow to the tune
    close embrace with the moon
    eyes lit up like a celestial sky
    his devotion can make you cry

    he is special, never asks a thing
    just wants to be loved like a king
    so giving to me, I always accept
    I think I'll keep him, and I'll be kept.

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    california commented on feeling good

    05-07-2011

    very nice poem.......... liked this much..... you may lose some younger readers with billie holiday though............
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