Feelings of love

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    Feelings of love

    Feelings of love

     

    The way you touch and fingers brush

    A love so untouched by other thoughts.

    The way you smile is like a lighting revival.

    Flitter, Flutter, two hearts for one another.

    Feelings of rapture the way you capture my heart.

    Your love started in steps then skips, bounds and jumps

    Loving you forever you’re the one.

     

    By Brittiany O’Neil

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    bklynrizz commented on Feelings of love

    12-22-2009

    Excellently done. Nice flow. I liked the rhythm. A very pretty poem.

    BrittKun

    12/25/2009

    Thanks!! For the comment every one counts!!! : )

    Platti commented on Feelings of love

    12-18-2009

    oh wow, this is absolutely adorable :3 I love the flow you have going on in this one

    BrittKun

    12/19/2009

    Thanks !! Its about my honey!!! LOL :3

    Paige commented on Feelings of love

    11-06-2009

    Wow, that's a really cute poem!!!! I totally love the way you described love as rhythmic. Awesome Write!!!!!

    BrittKun

    11/17/2009

    Thanks. Its about my b-freind

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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