Feelings

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    Feelings

    Who are you?
    What do I say?
    Why do yo make me,
    Feel this way?

    Never knowing what to do,
    Never knowing what to say,
    Never knowing how to reach you.

    Too much energy wasted on thought,
    When I always end up alone with what I've wrought.

    Indifference is just that,
    I can't put on an act.

    I feel what I feel,
    And my feelings are real.

    Based on physical,
    Rolled in with analytical,
    Then given to emotional.

    A bit overwhelming,
    And the intensity is high,
    I can't help it,
    I don't know why.

    Passionate people are frought with pain,
    Everyone's always looking to gain,
    From unfortunate circumstances that occur,
    We we want to live life with such verve.

    Am I alone,
    In what I want,
    Or is what's done
    Just a silly jaunt? 

    Answers are good,
    Almost like food.

    We need to feel alive,
    Just to survive.

    The pain of uncertainty,
    That is the way to Me.

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    kdarcy commented on Feelings

    08-01-2010

    It is how people feel sometimes, good , bad or indifferent. Growing beyond the moment yeilds much. Things have righted themselves, I can only hope. Good words

    laydbak1 commented on Feelings

    09-01-2009

    Life does, unfortunately sometimes, take on an emotional "hopscotch-like" drama to it... But, if we do nothing at all, but survive each episode of circumstance that saps our strength and taxes our spirit to persevere, we learn from it... We should embrace the bad times for what they give us when it's over - a better understanding and appreciation for the good... Great write...

    dahlusion commented on Feelings

    08-28-2009

    The uncertainty expressed here in (almost) not believing in yourself is painful to read. We are who we believe we are. This line, "Too much energy wasted on thought" — may want to read: too much energy wasted on the "wrong" thoughts. Form the habit of believing in yourself by way of right thoughts. Thoughts are powerful, vital energy in creative motion, so create what you want by way of "right thoughts". Thank you for reaching out with your feelings. Now, recreate yourself.

    LeLover

    09/01/2009

    I plan to do just that ! Gettin out of Houston for a while - feel stagnated here right now. I need some room to grow with my little guy (son, Al who's 10) Gonna do some sketching too. Possibly paint and try to creat some different things. Thanks! :o)

    WordSlinger commented on Feelings

    08-27-2009

    These are feelings for sure, slinging them tight and full of passionm I like the rhymes, this very touching, bless ya, :)

    LeLover

    09/01/2009

    Thanks for your kind words! :o)

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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