Fickle Fantasy

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Fickle Fantasy

I felt I needed

And I craved to have

An understanding friend

 

I dreamed and desired

For so foolish a thing.

 

But Now I know and see,

What it is I truly need.

 

My heart and mind long,

For someone who will follow,

When I run crying,

Desperate, alone and afraid.

 

Confused and lonesome I rest,

Deceived and destroyed,

By my foolishly fickle fantasy.

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deathsolo commented on Fickle Fantasy

06-11-2010

i really like this one as welll...bc it is so true..we are lucky to have atleast one person in our life that we can connect to in such a strong way. LOVE IT!!!

frazel5 commented on Fickle Fantasy

10-25-2009

I think i chose a good one for my first read of yours. This is very well written. This can be applied to so many different things in life. Bravo.

DarkChi commented on Fickle Fantasy

10-22-2009

cute. i long for an understanding friend to....and yet i don't think i'd want a friend who be stupid to get killed

Tempy commented on Fickle Fantasy

10-14-2009

i get this... i never want someone who cant help rezscue

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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