Fields Of Green For my love

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    I wrote this poem or maybe just a thought for the one man that I love more then anything in the world. My husband Sean. He Is my dark knight. And you will find that I write alot about him. I would never know what to do with myself If he wasnt standing by my side.

    Fields Of Green For my love

    Fields of Green
    Wild flowers all around
    A light sound of a brook in the distance
    I feel your heart beat with mine.
    I feel you in my mind
    Is it a dream?
    Could this really be for real?
    Looking to the heaven's , I see a bald eagle soaring in the sky.
    Is that a sign? Could freedom be in our mist.
    I feel you next to me. I feel you all around.
    I hold my breath I know you will soon be here.
    To hold and dream the dreams we once had.
    As the day turns to night the light dew forms on the ground.


    My heart achs for your touch. I feel you I know that your there. Waiting for the day to come.
    you are my everything. My knight , My heart, my soul.

    Courting down the days my love.


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    ApaqRasgirl commented on Fields Of Green For my love

    09-02-2010

    that was beautiful dear, such a very tender memory of the one you love and miss, I know that feeling all too well, as I am counting down those days as well till I will be with my soul mate once more in his arms.....thanks for the lovely write.......love asha
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    mountainlady

    09/04/2010

    u are very welcome

    ginga commented on Fields Of Green For my love

    09-02-2010

    mt. A tender poem of unyielding love was never so sweet. ginga
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    gogant commented on Fields Of Green For my love

    07-01-2010

    Don't all of us guys wish there was one so true as you.....just to know they have someone waiting in a "field of green" with so much love waiting to be taken in................Lovely.....................gogant
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    mountainlady

    07/02/2010

    ty ....

    BikemanRJ commented on Fields Of Green For my love

    04-26-2010

    You paint a beautiful picture with this poem. There is so much feeling put into this. "I feel your heart beat with mine I feel you in my mind I feel you next to me I feel you all around." Wow very sensual Great Poem God Bless Randy
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    mountainlady

    04/27/2010

    ty

    lunamarie commented on Fields Of Green For my love

    04-18-2010

    ml, I see your love of nature and it really compliments your poetry ... "absence makes the heart grow fonder" ............ lm
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