Fin My Next Life

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film i want to see "Cloud Atlas"

Fin My Next Life

 
     In my nest (next) life
 
give me, rock hard commitments
unwavering strengths of true love 
 
pomegranate lips full of passion
colored within deep ruby red
promises
 
skin darken with airbrushed, coppered
bronze
heated under muscled saintly sin (skin)
 
hair as dark as the unseeing
night
 
mix with wanting and rub
heated under wet intentions
licked and breath in
hold and screams
shake and moan
till reLife (relief) sucks me in
 
passions of the two
soaked in the juicy fruit
of wet pounding
 
wiggles of sweet sweat
loud deep sound of breathing 
unrecognizable words of panting
and where to heart meet and
none can pull apart...
 
(fin = end)

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dahlusion commented on Fin My Next Life

01-31-2013

"wiggles of sweet sweat loud deep sound of breathing unrecognizable words of panting and where to heart meet and none can pull apart... " —beautifully poetic! bRAVO!

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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