Finally, maybe...

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Finally, maybe...

Finally, maybe i'm starting to see
This world isn't all cruel to me
Possibly now i can look past
The grief i was given-the love that didn't last

Finally, maybe he wont make me cry
Whenever that trauma evoking person passes by
I think i may be able to smile
Divert my attention for a long while

Eventually all good things perish
Ruminated despite how you cherish
We the people just have to deal
Finding new joy amid our illusion's hypnotic wheel

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MalikPeterson commented on Finally, maybe...

03-22-2010

I like the journey you took. I am not sure where it started and It seems that you had to go through many deep dark woods to get to your final destination...but the good thing is that you made it and you have taught yourself how to smile and enjoy the moment. :)

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Lizziewriter27’s Poems (59)

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At My Weakest 1
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A Painful Fate 0
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Greater Things 1
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Why? 0
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